| Who am I? - Poem |
[Dec. 8th, 2004|01:24 am EST] |
| [ | I'm Feeling |
| | poetic | ] |
| [ | I'm Listening to |
| | Final Fantasy VIII - The Oath | ] | Dark and desolate, Once so bright, now so dark; Once so warm, now so cold. What have I become? What have I done?
Alone in despair, Full of pain, full of hate; Full of suffering, void of joy. What have I become? What have I done?
Once so happy, now alone; A faded existance, now all gone; I am but a shadow, no form of my own. In darkness I dwell, in pain I shall stay. An enigma, an unquestioned existance.
What I once was, no longer exists; Myself am changed, but what have I become? My past forgotten, what have I done? The things I never knew, the things I no longer know; I seek the truth. I want to know.
Faded, hated, lost, alone; Changes known, causes unknown; Who am I, what have I become? What once was, no longer is; All is gone, this is the end. Who am I? And what have I become?
Charlie 12/8/04 1:38am |
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| Comments: |
Add some guitar rifts, a drummer, some bass, and an kick ass vocalist...think you got something there... ^_^
Well then, that's one of the best compliments I've ever gotten for any of my poetry. Thanks a lot. :] | |